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Verbatim from accepted v02.", "phraseRelease": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Зустріла", "release": { "anchor": "колишнього", "kind": "collision", "reason": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "collision with focus on Зустріла; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p02", "text": "Ї́й — три́дцять чоти́ри.", "meaningIds": [ "t02" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a02" ], "semanticFocus": "тридцять чотири", "speechAct": "fact", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "fact: Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02.", "phraseRelease": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on тридцять чотири", "release": { "anchor": "чотири", "kind": "fact", "reason": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "fact with focus on тридцять чотири; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p03", "text": "Та́к гля́нула, на́че ї́й мене́ жа́ль.", "meaningIds": [ "t03" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a03" ], "semanticFocus": "жаль", "speechAct": "reveal", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "reveal: Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift.", "phraseRelease": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on жаль", "release": { "anchor": "жаль", "kind": "reveal", "reason": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "reveal with focus on жаль; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p04", "text": "Бу́в бе́резень.", "meaningIds": [ "t04" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a04" ], "semanticFocus": "березень", "speechAct": "time", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "time: Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1).", "phraseRelease": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1).", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on березень", "release": { "anchor": "березень", "kind": "time", "reason": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1)." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "time with focus on березень; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1)." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1)." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1)." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1)." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p05", "text": "Ми́ з Андрі́єм — шістна́дцять ро́ків у шлю́бі.", "meaningIds": [ "t05" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a05" ], "semanticFocus": "шістнадцять", "speechAct": "duration", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "duration: Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it.", "phraseRelease": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on шістнадцять", "release": { "anchor": "шлюбі", "kind": "duration", "reason": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "duration with focus on шістнадцять; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p06", "text": "Ві́н пішо́в до коле́ги.", "meaningIds": [ "t06" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a06" ], "semanticFocus": "колеги", "speechAct": "fact", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "fact: Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02.", "phraseRelease": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on колеги", "release": { "anchor": "колеги", "kind": "fact", "reason": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "fact with focus on колеги; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p07", "text": "Бана́льно, я́ зна́ю.", "meaningIds": [ "t06", "t07" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a06", "a07" ], "semanticFocus": "я знаю", "speechAct": "aside", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "aside: Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02.", "phraseRelease": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on я знаю", "release": { "anchor": "знаю", "kind": "aside", "reason": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "aside with focus on я знаю; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p08", "text": "Вона́ га́рна без зуси́ль — ще́ ча́с не торкну́вся.", "meaningIds": [ "t07" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a07" ], "semanticFocus": "час", "speechAct": "observation", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "observation: Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish).", "phraseRelease": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish).", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on час", "release": { "anchor": "торкнувся", "kind": "observation", "reason": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish)." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "observation with focus on час; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish)." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish)." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish)." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish)." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p09", "text": "А я́ за пі́в ро́ку немо́в постарі́ла на п'я́ть лі́т.", "meaningIds": [ "t08" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a08" ], "semanticFocus": "п'ять літ", "speechAct": "contrast", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "contrast: B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase.", "phraseRelease": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on п'ять літ", "release": { "anchor": "літ", "kind": "contrast", "reason": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "contrast with focus on п'ять літ; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase." }, "contrast": { "decision": "п'ять літ", "reason": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p10", "text": "Стре́с лиша́є слі́д.", "meaningIds": [ "t09" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a09" ], "semanticFocus": "слід", "speechAct": "cell-one", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "cell-one: First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on слід", "release": { "anchor": "слід", "kind": "cell-one", "reason": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "cell-one with focus on слід; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "слід", "reason": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p11", "text": "Нічні́ сльо́зи лиша́ють слі́д.", "meaningIds": [ "t09" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a09" ], "semanticFocus": "слід", "speechAct": "cell-two", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "cell-two: Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on слід", "release": { "anchor": "слід", "kind": "cell-two", "reason": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "cell-two with focus on слід; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "слід", "reason": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p12", "text": "Коли́ ді́тям ти́ опо́ра — це́ те́ж лиша́є слі́д.", "meaningIds": [ "t09" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a09" ], "semanticFocus": "опора", "speechAct": "cell-three", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "cell-three: Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring.", "phraseRelease": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on опора", "release": { "anchor": "слід", "kind": "cell-three", "reason": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "cell-three with focus on опора; register mid; hold allowed: слід", "reason": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring." }, "contrast": { "decision": "опора", "reason": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "слід" }, { "id": "p13", "text": "У субо́ту: крамни́ця, лоси́ни, пучо́к. Без косме́тики.", "meaningIds": [ "t10" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a10" ], "semanticFocus": "Без косметики", "speechAct": "scene", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "scene: Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame.", "phraseRelease": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Без косметики", "release": { "anchor": "косметики", "kind": "scene", "reason": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "scene with focus on Без косметики; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p14", "text": "Зно́в дивлю́сь на кре́м. Сті́льки про́б — і все́ ма́рно.", "meaningIds": [ "t11" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a11" ], "semanticFocus": "марно", "speechAct": "failed-search", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "failed-search: Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on марно", "release": { "anchor": "марно", "kind": "failed-search", "reason": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "failed-search with focus on марно; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p15", "text": "Із сусі́днього ря́ду її́ го́лос впізна́ла.", "meaningIds": [ "t12" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a12" ], "semanticFocus": "голос", "speechAct": "recognition", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "recognition: Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла.", "phraseRelease": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on голос", "release": { "anchor": "впізнала", "kind": "recognition", "reason": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "recognition with focus on голос; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p16", "text": "Вона́ ви́йшла. По́гляд ковзну́в по ши́ї.", "meaningIds": [ "t13" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a13" ], "semanticFocus": "по шиї", "speechAct": "scan", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "scan: Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on по шиї", "release": { "anchor": "шиї", "kind": "scan", "reason": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "scan with focus on по шиї; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p17", "text": "Секу́нди дві́ — і усмі́шка.", "meaningIds": [ "t13" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a13" ], "semanticFocus": "дві", "speechAct": "scan-result", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "scan-result: A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'.", "phraseRelease": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on дві", "release": { "anchor": "усмішка", "kind": "scan-result", "reason": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "scan-result with focus on дві; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p18", "text": "Не злі́сть. Ні́, ще́ гі́рше. Жа́лість.", "meaningIds": [ "t14" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a14" ], "semanticFocus": "Жалість", "speechAct": "gaze-first", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "gaze-first: Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell.", "phraseRelease": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Жалість", "release": { "anchor": "Жалість", "kind": "gaze-first", "reason": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "gaze-first with focus on Жалість; register mid; hold allowed: Жалість", "reason": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell." }, "contrast": { "decision": "Жалість", "reason": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "Жалість" }, { "id": "p19", "text": "На́че я́ — коли́шня ве́рсія жі́нки, яку́ ві́н пе́ршою люби́в.", "meaningIds": [ "t15" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a15" ], "semanticFocus": "першою", "speechAct": "identity-wound", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "identity-wound: The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs.", "phraseRelease": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on першою", "release": { "anchor": "любив", "kind": "identity-wound", "reason": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "identity-wound with focus on першою; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p20", "text": "Дійшла́ до маши́ни й сиді́ла п'ятна́дцять хвили́н.", "meaningIds": [ "t16" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a16" ], "semanticFocus": "п'ятнадцять хвилин", "speechAct": "consequence", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "consequence: B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated.", "phraseRelease": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on п'ятнадцять хвилин", "release": { "anchor": "хвилин", "kind": "consequence", "reason": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "consequence with focus on п'ятнадцять хвилин; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p21", "text": "Не на не́ї зли́лась — на те́, що в дзе́ркалі ба́чила.", "meaningIds": [ "t17" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a17" ], "semanticFocus": "Не на неї", "speechAct": "anger-turn", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "anger-turn: Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap.", "phraseRelease": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Не на неї", "release": { "anchor": "бачила", "kind": "anger-turn", "reason": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "anger-turn with focus on Не на неї; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap." }, "contrast": { "decision": "Не на неї", "reason": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p22", "text": "На ши́ї — сму́ги, зало́ми й су́хість.", "meaningIds": [ "t18" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a18" ], "semanticFocus": "На шиї", "speechAct": "problem", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "problem: Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість.", "phraseRelease": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on На шиї", "release": { "anchor": "сухість", "kind": "problem", "reason": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "problem with focus on На шиї; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p23", "text": "Ні́би сві́тло в мені́ зга́сло.", "meaningIds": [ "t19" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a19" ], "semanticFocus": "згасло", "speechAct": "inner-image", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "inner-image: C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress.", "phraseRelease": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on згасло", "release": { "anchor": "згасло", "kind": "inner-image", "reason": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "inner-image with focus on згасло; register mid; hold allowed: згасло", "reason": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "згасло" }, { "id": "p24", "text": "Того́ ти́жня чека́ла до́ньку пі́сля та́нців.", "meaningIds": [ "t20" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a20" ], "semanticFocus": "доньку", "speechAct": "new-scene", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "new-scene: C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців.", "phraseRelease": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on доньку", "release": { "anchor": "танців", "kind": "new-scene", "reason": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "new-scene with focus on доньку; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p25", "text": "Лари́су я́ ба́чила та́м щодня́.", "meaningIds": [ "t20" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a20" ], "semanticFocus": "Ларису", "speechAct": "familiar-person", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "familiar-person: C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-.", "phraseRelease": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Ларису", "release": { "anchor": "щодня", "kind": "familiar-person", "reason": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "familiar-person with focus on Ларису; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p26", "text": "Ї́й п'ятдеся́т п'я́ть. А ши́я — гладе́нька.", "meaningIds": [ "t21" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a21" ], "semanticFocus": "А шия", "speechAct": "credible-contrast", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "credible-contrast: Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on А шия", "release": { "anchor": "гладенька", "kind": "credible-contrast", "reason": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "credible-contrast with focus on А шия; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "А шия", "reason": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p27", "text": "Пита́ю: «Чи́м ти́ користу́єшся?»", "meaningIds": [ "t21" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a21" ], "semanticFocus": "Чим", "speechAct": "question", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "question: Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped.", "phraseRelease": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Чим", "release": { "anchor": "користуєшся", "kind": "question", "reason": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "question with focus on Чим; register high; hold allowed: користуєшся", "reason": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "high", "holdAllowed": "користуєшся" }, { "id": "p28", "text": "Вона́ засмія́лась, гля́нула на ши́ю:", "meaningIds": [ "t22" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a22" ], "semanticFocus": "засміялась", "speechAct": "laugh-and-inspect", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "laugh-and-inspect: Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence.", "phraseRelease": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on засміялась", "release": { "anchor": "шию", "kind": "laugh-and-inspect", "reason": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "laugh-and-inspect with focus on засміялась; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p29", "text": "«А ти́ що нано́сиш?»", "meaningIds": [ "t22" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a22" ], "semanticFocus": "А ти", "speechAct": "counter-question", "addressee": "Larysa", "delivery": "counter-question: Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection.", "phraseRelease": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on А ти", "release": { "anchor": "наносиш", "kind": "counter-question", "reason": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "counter-question with focus on А ти; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection." }, "contrast": { "decision": "А ти", "reason": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection." }, "character": "larysa", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p30", "text": "«Кисло́ти, сиро́ватки, кре́ми — міня́ю все́ підря́д».", "meaningIds": [ "t23" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a23" ], "semanticFocus": "все підряд", "speechAct": "confession", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "confession: B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending.", "phraseRelease": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on все підряд", "release": { "anchor": "підряд", "kind": "confession", "reason": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "confession with focus on все підряд; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p31", "text": "«Сті́й. Не все́ підря́д. Догляда́й щодня́».", "meaningIds": [ "t24" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a24" ], "semanticFocus": "Стій", "speechAct": "advice-pivot", "addressee": "Larysa", "delivery": "advice-pivot: Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour.", "phraseRelease": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Стій", "release": { "anchor": "щодня", "kind": "advice-pivot", "reason": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "advice-pivot with focus on Стій; register high; hold allowed: Стій", "reason": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Band stops on the word, half-beat silence, resumes under the advice", "reason": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour." }, "character": "larysa", "register": "high", "holdAllowed": "Стій" }, { "id": "p32", "text": "Наза́втра Лари́са дала́ мені́ ба́нку.", "meaningIds": [ "t25" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a25" ], "semanticFocus": "Лариса дала", "speechAct": "handoff", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "handoff: Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action.", "phraseRelease": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Лариса дала", "release": { "anchor": "банку", "kind": "handoff", "reason": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "handoff with focus on Лариса дала; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p33", "text": "Про це́й кре́м ще́ не чу́ла.", "meaningIds": [ "t25" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a25" ], "semanticFocus": "не чула", "speechAct": "unfamiliar-object", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "unfamiliar-object: Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget.", "phraseRelease": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on не чула", "release": { "anchor": "чула", "kind": "unfamiliar-object", "reason": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "unfamiliar-object with focus on не чула; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p34", "text": "У ба́нці — купуасу́, гіалуро́н, оли́вні ліпі́ди й кофеї́н.", "meaningIds": [ "t26" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a26" ], "semanticFocus": "купуасу", "speechAct": "ingredient-list", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "ingredient-list: Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony.", "phraseRelease": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on купуасу", "release": { "anchor": "кофеїн", "kind": "ingredient-list", "reason": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "ingredient-list with focus on купуасу; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p35", "text": "«На чи́сту ши́ю — то́нко, вго́ру. Щове́чора. Не міня́й».", "meaningIds": [ "t26" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a26" ], "semanticFocus": "Щовечора", "speechAct": "ritual", "addressee": "Larysa", "delivery": "ritual: Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed.", "phraseRelease": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Щовечора", "release": { "anchor": "міняй", "kind": "ritual", "reason": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "ritual with focus on Щовечора; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed." }, "character": "larysa", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p36", "text": "Без печі́ння. Без лу́щення. Комфо́ртно.", "meaningIds": [ "t27" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a27" ], "semanticFocus": "Комфортно", "speechAct": "felt-result", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "felt-result: Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped.", "phraseRelease": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Комфортно", "release": { "anchor": "Комфортно", "kind": "felt-result", "reason": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "felt-result with focus on Комфортно; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p37", "text": "За три́ ти́жні бі́ля дзе́ркала спини́лась.", "meaningIds": [ "t28" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a28" ], "semanticFocus": "спинилась", "speechAct": "partial-surprise", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "partial-surprise: Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s).", "phraseRelease": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s).", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on спинилась", "release": { "anchor": "спинилась", "kind": "partial-surprise", "reason": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s)." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "partial-surprise with focus on спинилась; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s)." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s)." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s)." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s)." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p38", "text": "Сму́ги вже́ ме́нш помі́тні.", "meaningIds": [ "t28" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a28" ], "semanticFocus": "менш помітні", "speechAct": "partial-result", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "partial-result: Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on менш помітні", "release": { "anchor": "помітні", "kind": "partial-result", "reason": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "partial-result with focus on менш помітні; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p39", "text": "До́нька ка́же: «Ма́мо, ти́ іна́кша.", "meaningIds": [ "t29" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a29" ], "semanticFocus": "Мамо", "speechAct": "child-observation", "addressee": "Oksana", "delivery": "child-observation: Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top.", "phraseRelease": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Мамо", "release": { "anchor": "інакша", "kind": "child-observation", "reason": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "child-observation with focus on Мамо; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top." }, "character": "daughter", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p40", "text": "Га́рно іна́кша. Світлі́ша яка́сь».", "meaningIds": [ "t29" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a29" ], "semanticFocus": "Гарно", "speechAct": "child-clarification", "addressee": "Oksana", "delivery": "child-clarification: C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur.", "phraseRelease": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Гарно", "release": { "anchor": "якась", "kind": "child-clarification", "reason": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "child-clarification with focus on Гарно; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur." }, "character": "daughter", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p41", "text": "А за ші́сть — не пові́рила оча́м!", "meaningIds": [ "t30" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a30" ], "semanticFocus": "шість", "speechAct": "time-hold", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "time-hold: Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after.", "phraseRelease": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on шість", "release": { "anchor": "очам", "kind": "time-hold", "reason": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "time-hold with focus on шість; register high; hold allowed: шість", "reason": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Rhythm thins under the held time word; audible breath before the reveal", "reason": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "high", "holdAllowed": "шість" }, { "id": "p42", "text": "Ши́я гладе́нька. Ні́ сму́г, ні́ зало́мів.", "meaningIds": [ "t30" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a30" ], "semanticFocus": "Ні смуг", "speechAct": "complete-result", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "complete-result: Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Ні смуг", "release": { "anchor": "заломів", "kind": "complete-result", "reason": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "complete-result with focus on Ні смуг; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p43", "text": "Де́сять ро́ків шкі́ра тако́ю рі́вною не була́.", "meaningIds": [ "t31" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a31" ], "semanticFocus": "Десять років", "speechAct": "comparison", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "comparison: Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Десять років", "release": { "anchor": "була", "kind": "comparison", "reason": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "comparison with focus on Десять років; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p44", "text": "З відкри́тою ши́єю я́ ви́йшла на лю́ди.", "meaningIds": [ "t31" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a31" ], "semanticFocus": "відкритою шиєю", "speechAct": "neck-payoff", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "neck-payoff: Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable.", "phraseRelease": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on відкритою шиєю", "release": { "anchor": "люди", "kind": "neck-payoff", "reason": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "neck-payoff with focus on відкритою шиєю; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p45", "text": "У че́рвні до́ньчин кла́с дава́в конце́рт.", "meaningIds": [ "t32" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a32" ], "semanticFocus": "червні", "speechAct": "return-time", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "return-time: B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт.", "phraseRelease": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on червні", "release": { "anchor": "концерт", "kind": "return-time", "reason": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "return-time with focus on червні; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p46", "text": "До́нька гра́ла на піані́но.", "meaningIds": [ "t32" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a32" ], "semanticFocus": "Донька", "speechAct": "recital", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "recital: Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Донька", "release": { "anchor": "піаніно", "kind": "recital", "reason": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "recital with focus on Донька; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p47", "text": "Дружи́на Андрі́я сі́ла неподалі́к.", "meaningIds": [ "t33" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a33" ], "semanticFocus": "Дружина Андрія", "speechAct": "return-encounter", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "return-encounter: Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim.", "phraseRelease": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Дружина Андрія", "release": { "anchor": "неподалік", "kind": "return-encounter", "reason": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "return-encounter with focus on Дружина Андрія; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p48", "text": "І зно́в то́й по́гляд. Не жа́лість. Не співчуття́. Розгу́блена.", "meaningIds": [ "t33" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a33" ], "semanticFocus": "Розгублена", "speechAct": "gaze-return", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "gaze-return: C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped.", "phraseRelease": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Розгублена", "release": { "anchor": "Розгублена", "kind": "gaze-return", "reason": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "gaze-return with focus on Розгублена; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped." }, "contrast": { "decision": "Розгублена", "reason": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p49", "text": "Пі́сля конце́рту підійшла́.", "meaningIds": [ "t34" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a34" ], "semanticFocus": "підійшла", "speechAct": "approach", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "approach: Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch.", "phraseRelease": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on підійшла", "release": { "anchor": "підійшла", "kind": "approach", "reason": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "approach with focus on підійшла; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p50", "text": "«Ти́ ду́же га́рно вигляда́єш… до ре́чі».", "meaningIds": [ "t34" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a34" ], "semanticFocus": "дуже гарно", "speechAct": "compliment-with-tag", "addressee": "Oksana", "delivery": "compliment-with-tag: Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'.", "phraseRelease": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on дуже гарно", "release": { "anchor": "речі", "kind": "compliment-with-tag", "reason": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "compliment-with-tag with focus on дуже гарно; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'." }, "character": "wife", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p51", "text": "Та сама́, че́рез яку́ в маши́ні сиді́ла я́ навесні́.", "meaningIds": [ "t35" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a35" ], "semanticFocus": "Та сама", "speechAct": "memory-return", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "memory-return: Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні.", "phraseRelease": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Та сама", "release": { "anchor": "навесні", "kind": "memory-return", "reason": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "memory-return with focus on Та сама; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "low", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p52", "text": "Я́ щи́ро сказа́ла: «Дя́кую». І спра́вді та́к відчува́ла.", "meaningIds": [ "t36" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a36" ], "semanticFocus": "щиро", "speechAct": "sincere-response", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "sincere-response: Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction.", "phraseRelease": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on щиро", "release": { "anchor": "відчувала", "kind": "sincere-response", "reason": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "sincere-response with focus on щиро; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p53", "text": "Не тому́, що її́ ду́мка що́сь ва́жить.", "meaningIds": [ "t37" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a37" ], "semanticFocus": "її", "speechAct": "external-negation", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "external-negation: Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected.", "phraseRelease": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on її", "release": { "anchor": "важить", "kind": "external-negation", "reason": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "external-negation with focus on її; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected." }, "contrast": { "decision": "її", "reason": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p54", "text": "А тому́, що свою́ я́ наре́шті ціну́ю.", "meaningIds": [ "t37" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a37" ], "semanticFocus": "свою", "speechAct": "self-worth", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "self-worth: Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar.", "phraseRelease": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on свою", "release": { "anchor": "ціную", "kind": "self-worth", "reason": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "self-worth with focus on свою; register high; hold allowed: свою", "reason": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar." }, "contrast": { "decision": "свою", "reason": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "high", "holdAllowed": "свою" }, { "id": "p55", "text": "Кре́м назива́ється… Ґо́у П’ю́р.", "meaningIds": [ "t38" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a38" ], "semanticFocus": "Ґоу П’юр", "speechAct": "brand", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "brand: Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole.", "phraseRelease": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Ґоу П’юр", "release": { "anchor": "П’юр", "kind": "brand", "reason": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "brand with focus on Ґоу П’юр; register mid; hold allowed: П’юр", "reason": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "One bar of guitar only before this brand phrase", "reason": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "П’юр" }, { "id": "p56", "text": "Ім'я́ й но́мер зали́ш у фо́рмі.", "meaningIds": [ "t39" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a39" ], "semanticFocus": "Ім'я й номер", "speechAct": "order", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "order: Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line.", "phraseRelease": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Ім'я й номер", "release": { "anchor": "формі", "kind": "order", "reason": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "order with focus on Ім'я й номер; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p57", "text": "На по́шті огля́нь — і пла́тиш по́тім.", "meaningIds": [ "t39" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a39" ], "semanticFocus": "потім", "speechAct": "payment-condition", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "payment-condition: Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word.", "phraseRelease": "Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on потім", "release": { "anchor": "потім", "kind": "payment-condition", "reason": "Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "payment-condition with focus on потім; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p58", "text": "На пове́рнення — шістдеся́т дні́в.", "meaningIds": [ "t39" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a39" ], "semanticFocus": "шістдесят днів", "speechAct": "return-condition", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "return-condition: B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння.", "phraseRelease": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on шістдесят днів", "release": { "anchor": "днів", "kind": "return-condition", "reason": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "return-condition with focus on шістдесят днів; register mid; hold allowed: none", "reason": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" }, { "id": "p59", "text": "Якщо́ тобі́ потрі́бно — посила́ння внизу́.", "meaningIds": [ "t39" ], "rhetoricIds": [ "a39" ], "semanticFocus": "Якщо тобі потрібно", "speechAct": "optional-coda", "addressee": "listener/self", "delivery": "optional-coda: Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold.", "phraseRelease": "Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold.", "stressIntent": "Lexical stress follows occurrence ledger; semantic emphasis on Якщо тобі потрібно", "release": { "anchor": "внизу", "kind": "optional-coda", "reason": "Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold." }, "contourRhythm": { "decision": "optional-coda with focus on Якщо тобі потрібно; register low; hold allowed: none", "reason": "Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold." }, "breathRole": { "decision": "Complete this thought and release before the next rhetorical action; punctuation inside the line is optional breath; never clip a word; no instrumental answer after the line.", "reason": "Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold." }, "accompanimentRole": { "decision": "Continuous acoustic pulse under the voice; vocal upfront; no gap after the line", "reason": "Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold." }, "contrast": { "decision": "No independent binary contrast; focal word completes this source action", "reason": "Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold." }, "character": "narrator", "register": "mid", "holdAllowed": "none" } ], "sections": [ { "id": "s1-hook", "phraseIds": [ "p01", "p02", "p03", "p04", "p05", "p06", "p07", "p08", "p09" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 0, 30.4 ], "intendedSeconds": 25, "rationale": "Sung at once, no intro; short dry facts; asides half-spoken in chest voice; clipped word endings; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Sung at once, no intro; short dry facts; asides half-spoken in chest voice; clipped word endings", "arrangementIntent": "Sung at once, no intro; short dry facts; asides half-spoken in chest voice; clipped word endings", "motifIntent": "Sung at once, no intro; short dry facts; asides half-spoken in chest voice; clipped word endings", "energyIntent": "Sung at once, no intro; short dry facts; asides half-spoken in chest voice; clipped word endings", "informationBudget": [] }, { "id": "s2-cost-store", "phraseIds": [ "p10", "p11", "p12", "p13", "p14", "p15", "p16", "p17" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 25.8, 52.4 ], "intendedSeconds": 25, "rationale": "Same falling cadence three times, third slid may ring; store list as quick patter; the smile line low and dry; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Same falling cadence three times, third slid may ring; store list as quick patter; the smile line low and dry", "arrangementIntent": "Same falling cadence three times, third slid may ring; store list as quick patter; the smile line low and dry", "motifIntent": "Same falling cadence three times, third slid may ring; store list as quick patter; the smile line low and dry", "energyIntent": "Same falling cadence three times, third slid may ring; store list as quick patter; the smile line low and dry", "informationBudget": [ { "factId": "payment", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p16" ], "reason": "All ordering and inspection-before-payment conditions remain audible", "attentionCost": "Short clauses inside the intentional coda", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." } ] }, { "id": "s3-wound", "phraseIds": [ "p18", "p19", "p20", "p21", "p22", "p23" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 52.4, 81.0 ], "intendedSeconds": 24, "rationale": "Negation, then delayed reveal on zhalist; long thought flows to lyubyv; hold only zhaslo, clip everything else; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Negation, then delayed reveal on zhalist; long thought flows to lyubyv; hold only zhaslo, clip everything else", "arrangementIntent": "Negation, then delayed reveal on zhalist; long thought flows to lyubyv; hold only zhaslo, clip everything else", "motifIntent": "Negation, then delayed reveal on zhalist; long thought flows to lyubyv; hold only zhaslo, clip everything else", "energyIntent": "Negation, then delayed reveal on zhalist; long thought flows to lyubyv; hold only zhaslo, clip everything else", "informationBudget": [] }, { "id": "s4-mentor", "phraseIds": [ "p24", "p25", "p26", "p27", "p28", "p29", "p30", "p31" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 81.0, 108.8 ], "intendedSeconds": 26, "rationale": "Low spoken lead-in; the question rises and plays on chym ty korystuyeshsya; Larysa lower and drier; band stops dead on Stiy, resumes on the advice; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Low spoken lead-in; the question rises and plays on chym ty korystuyeshsya; Larysa lower and drier; band stops dead on Stiy, resumes on the advice", "arrangementIntent": "Low spoken lead-in; the question rises and plays on chym ty korystuyeshsya; Larysa lower and drier; band stops dead on Stiy, resumes on the advice", "motifIntent": "Low spoken lead-in; the question rises and plays on chym ty korystuyeshsya; Larysa lower and drier; band stops dead on Stiy, resumes on the advice", "energyIntent": "Low spoken lead-in; the question rises and plays on chym ty korystuyeshsya; Larysa lower and drier; band stops dead on Stiy, resumes on the advice", "informationBudget": [ { "factId": "hydration", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p31" ], "reason": "Name actual cosmetic care benefit", "attentionCost": "Compact sung clause", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." }, { "factId": "ritual", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p25", "p31" ], "reason": "Explain actual product action and daily consistency", "attentionCost": "Enacted sung phrases", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." }, { "factId": "payment", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p31" ], "reason": "All ordering and inspection-before-payment conditions remain audible", "attentionCost": "Short clauses inside the intentional coda", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." } ] }, { "id": "s5-care", "phraseIds": [ "p32", "p33", "p34", "p35", "p36" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 108.8, 122.9 ], "intendedSeconds": 18, "rationale": "Unhurried care, Larysa dry and warm; ingredient names as clipped patter, ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; short endings, no held vowels; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Unhurried care, Larysa dry and warm; ingredient names as clipped patter, ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; short endings, no held vowels", "arrangementIntent": "Unhurried care, Larysa dry and warm; ingredient names as clipped patter, ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; short endings, no held vowels", "motifIntent": "Unhurried care, Larysa dry and warm; ingredient names as clipped patter, ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; short endings, no held vowels", "energyIntent": "Unhurried care, Larysa dry and warm; ingredient names as clipped patter, ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; short endings, no held vowels", "informationBudget": [ { "factId": "ingredients", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p34" ], "reason": "Maintain current formula meaning without unsupported clinical claims", "attentionCost": "Sung ingredient names; 4% and 50 ml remain display facts", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." }, { "factId": "ritual", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p35" ], "reason": "Explain actual product action and daily consistency", "attentionCost": "Enacted sung phrases", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." } ] }, { "id": "s6-change", "phraseIds": [ "p37", "p38", "p39", "p40", "p41", "p42", "p43", "p44" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 122.9, 146.4 ], "intendedSeconds": 25, "rationale": "Mirror stop; daughter lighter and higher; rhythm thins and a breath on shist, then the result plain; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Mirror stop; daughter lighter and higher; rhythm thins and a breath on shist, then the result plain", "arrangementIntent": "Mirror stop; daughter lighter and higher; rhythm thins and a breath on shist, then the result plain", "motifIntent": "Mirror stop; daughter lighter and higher; rhythm thins and a breath on shist, then the result plain", "energyIntent": "Mirror stop; daughter lighter and higher; rhythm thins and a breath on shist, then the result plain", "informationBudget": [ { "factId": "appearance", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p37", "p38", "p41", "p42", "p43", "p44" ], "reason": "Partial then complete supported cosmetic story, no universal guarantee", "attentionCost": "Result escalation earns exposed-neck behaviour", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." } ] }, { "id": "s7-return", "phraseIds": [ "p45", "p46", "p47", "p48", "p49", "p50", "p51" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 146.4, 173.6 ], "intendedSeconds": 26, "rationale": "Second gaze as dry staccato; the wife polite and even; do rechi dropped low after a beat; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Second gaze as dry staccato; the wife polite and even; do rechi dropped low after a beat", "arrangementIntent": "Second gaze as dry staccato; the wife polite and even; do rechi dropped low after a beat", "motifIntent": "Second gaze as dry staccato; the wife polite and even; do rechi dropped low after a beat", "energyIntent": "Second gaze as dry staccato; the wife polite and even; do rechi dropped low after a beat", "informationBudget": [ { "factId": "payment", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p48" ], "reason": "All ordering and inspection-before-payment conditions remain audible", "attentionCost": "Short clauses inside the intentional coda", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." } ] }, { "id": "s8-selfworth", "phraseIds": [ "p52", "p53", "p54" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 173.6, 182.6 ], "intendedSeconds": 13, "rationale": "Sincere thanks; peak and hold on svoyu, descend on tsinuyu; complete cadence; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "Sincere thanks; peak and hold on svoyu, descend on tsinuyu; complete cadence", "arrangementIntent": "Sincere thanks; peak and hold on svoyu, descend on tsinuyu; complete cadence", "motifIntent": "Sincere thanks; peak and hold on svoyu, descend on tsinuyu; complete cadence", "energyIntent": "Sincere thanks; peak and hold on svoyu, descend on tsinuyu; complete cadence", "informationBudget": [] }, { "id": "s9-coda", "phraseIds": [ "p55", "p56", "p57", "p58", "p59" ], "sourceAudioRange": [ 182.6, 188.5 ], "intendedSeconds": 19, "rationale": "One bar of guitar alone, then the brand ends its phrase: breath after nazyvayetsya, name attacked whole; conditions calm and clear; last line half-spoken, fade; planning budget, not provider duration guarantee or future picture slot.", "dramaticJob": "One bar of guitar alone, then the brand ends its phrase: breath after nazyvayetsya, name attacked whole; conditions calm and clear; last line half-spoken, fade", "arrangementIntent": "One bar of guitar alone, then the brand ends its phrase: breath after nazyvayetsya, name attacked whole; conditions calm and clear; last line half-spoken, fade", "motifIntent": "One bar of guitar alone, then the brand ends its phrase: breath after nazyvayetsya, name attacked whole; conditions calm and clear; last line half-spoken, fade", "energyIntent": "One bar of guitar alone, then the brand ends its phrase: breath after nazyvayetsya, name attacked whole; conditions calm and clear; last line half-spoken, fade", "informationBudget": [ { "factId": "payment", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p56" ], "reason": "All ordering and inspection-before-payment conditions remain audible", "attentionCost": "Short clauses inside the intentional coda", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." }, { "factId": "returns", "channel": "sung", "phraseIds": [ "p58" ], "reason": "Keep 60-day return condition", "attentionCost": "One sung phrase before the final invitation", "authority": "Owner goals 2026-09-15/16 permit channel decisions but forbid dropping required selling/ordering meaning; all conditions stay sung." } ] } ], "timingAuthority": "music-before-picture", "referencePriority": "source-rhetoric-over-default-softness", "intendedSeconds": 201, "endingIntent": { "requiredSungMeaning": "goPure brand at the end of its phrase; link below; name/phone form; inspect at the post office before paying; 60-day return; final low-pressure personal invitation.", "cadence": "One bar of guitar before the brand; brand held like the source; conditions as short half-spoken clauses in low register; final invitation half-sung with decay." }, "cellRealizations": [ { "cellId": "cost-cell", "phraseIds": [ "p10", "p11", "p12" ], "recurringGesture": "will do that causal ending", "variation": "stress / crying at night / holding children together", "functionPreserved": "Accumulate cost via recognizable return, third cause escalates caregiving burden." }, { "cellId": "gaze-cell", "phraseIds": [ "p18", "p47", "p48" ], "recurringGesture": "negation of expected look followed by revised interpretation", "variation": "not mean → worse → sympathetic; later not pity → not sympathy → confused", "functionPreserved": "Second encounter re-hears and reverses the first wound." }, { "cellId": "opinion-cell", "phraseIds": [ "p21", "p53", "p54" ], "recurringGesture": "not external target but own internal state/judgment", "variation": "not angry at her → own reflection; not her judgment → mine finally matters", "functionPreserved": "Relocate agency inward; self-worth is not rival approval." }, { "cellId": "recognition-return", "phraseIds": [ "p01", "p45", "p46", "p51", "p55", "p56", "p57", "p58", "p59" ], "recurringGesture": "direct narrated address opening and returning personal disclosure", "variation": "unexpected encounter → June and recalled car → optional recommendation", "functionPreserved": "Connect narrative return and brief sung coda without a second emotional climax." } ], "audioCausality": [ { "id": "care-cost", "sourceActionIds": [ "a09" ], "phraseIds": [ "p10", "p11", "p12" ], "actor": "Oksana", "action": "supports children through separation while distressed", "recipient": "children", "change": "her visible exhaustion has several accumulated causes", "problemRelation": "causal lead-in to neck vulnerability" }, { "id": "glance-wound", "sourceActionIds": [ "a13", "a14", "a16", "a17", "a18" ], "phraseIds": [ "p16", "p17", "p18", "p20", "p21", "p22" ], "actor": "Nataliia", "action": "looks at Oksana neck with pity", "recipient": "Oksana", "change": "Oksana sits in car and confronts reflected neck problem", "problemRelation": "neck is explicit object of gaze and mirror" }, { "id": "advice-reset", "sourceActionIds": [ "a22", "a23", "a24" ], "phraseIds": [ "p28", "p29", "p30", "p31" ], "actor": "Larysa", "action": "asks routine then interrupts constant changes", "recipient": "Oksana", "change": "chooses consistent daily care", "problemRelation": "no unsupported claim every former treatment worsened neck" }, { "id": "jar-transfer", "sourceActionIds": [ "a25" ], "phraseIds": [ "p32", "p33" ], "actor": "Larysa", "action": "gives purple jar next day", "recipient": "Oksana", "change": "has a concrete unfamiliar product to try", "problemRelation": "explicit donor/action/recipient" }, { "id": "application-result", "sourceActionIds": [ "a26", "a27", "a28", "a30", "a31" ], "phraseIds": [ "p34", "p35", "p36", "p37", "p38", "p41", "p42", "p43", "p44" ], "actor": "Oksana", "action": "opens jar, applies cream upward regularly", "recipient": "own neck", "change": "partial change precedes fully smooth neck and freely exposing it", "problemRelation": "same frozen neck defect, no face-foundation substitution" }, { "id": "return-selfworth", "sourceActionIds": [ "a33", "a34", "a35", "a36", "a37" ], "phraseIds": [ "p47", "p48", "p49", "p50", "p51", "p52", "p53", "p54" ], "actor": "Nataliia then Oksana", "action": "returns gaze, compliments; Oksana sincerely thanks", "recipient": "each other", "change": "own judgment matters independently of other approval", "problemRelation": "resolved neck is already established; praise is not proof of product efficacy" } ], "performancePlan": { "registerPlan": { "p01": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02." }, "p02": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02." }, "p03": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift." }, "p04": { "register": "low", "reason": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1)." }, "p05": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it." }, "p06": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02." }, "p07": { "register": "low", "reason": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02." }, "p08": { "register": "low", "reason": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish)." }, "p09": { "register": "mid", "reason": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase." }, "p10": { "register": "mid", "reason": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim." }, "p11": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim." }, "p12": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring." }, "p13": { "register": "low", "reason": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame." }, "p14": { "register": "low", "reason": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim." }, "p15": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла." }, "p16": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim." }, "p17": { "register": "low", "reason": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'." }, "p18": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell." }, "p19": { "register": "mid", "reason": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs." }, "p20": { "register": "mid", "reason": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated." }, "p21": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap." }, "p22": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість." }, "p23": { "register": "mid", "reason": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress." }, "p24": { "register": "low", "reason": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців." }, "p25": { "register": "low", "reason": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-." }, "p26": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim." }, "p27": { "register": "high", "reason": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped." }, "p28": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence." }, "p29": { "register": "low", "reason": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection." }, "p30": { "register": "mid", "reason": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending." }, "p31": { "register": "high", "reason": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour." }, "p32": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action." }, "p33": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget." }, "p34": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony." }, "p35": { "register": "low", "reason": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed." }, "p36": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped." }, "p37": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s)." }, "p38": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim." }, "p39": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top." }, "p40": { "register": "mid", "reason": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur." }, "p41": { "register": "high", "reason": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after." }, "p42": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim." }, "p43": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim." }, "p44": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable." }, "p45": { "register": "mid", "reason": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт." }, "p46": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim." }, "p47": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim." }, "p48": { "register": "mid", "reason": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped." }, "p49": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch." }, "p50": { "register": "low", "reason": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'." }, "p51": { "register": "low", "reason": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні." }, "p52": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction." }, "p53": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected." }, "p54": { "register": "high", "reason": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar." }, "p55": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole." }, "p56": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line." }, "p57": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Round 5: coda sung on pitch in a calm mid register; low cues produced unpitched narration in rounds 3–4." }, "p58": { "register": "mid", "reason": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння." }, "p59": { "register": "mid", "reason": "Round 5: coda sung on pitch in a calm mid register; low cues produced unpitched narration in rounds 3–4." } }, "syllableEconomy": { "rule": "The final unstressed syllable of a word is never longer than its stressed syllable; only holdAllowed words (focus words and lead-in pickups) may exceed 0.5 s; lists are clipped patter.", "holdAllowed": { "p01": "none", "p02": "none", "p03": "none", "p04": "none", "p05": "none", "p06": "none", "p07": "none", "p08": "none", "p09": "none", "p10": "none", "p11": "none", "p12": "слід", "p13": "none", "p14": "none", "p15": "none", "p16": "none", "p17": "none", "p18": "Жалість", "p19": "none", "p20": "none", "p21": "none", "p22": "none", "p23": "згасло", "p24": "none", "p25": "none", "p26": "none", "p27": "користуєшся", "p28": "none", "p29": "none", "p30": "none", "p31": "Стій", "p32": "none", "p33": "none", "p34": "none", "p35": "none", "p36": "none", "p37": "none", "p38": "none", "p39": "none", "p40": "none", "p41": "шість", "p42": "none", "p43": "none", "p44": "none", "p45": "none", "p46": "none", "p47": "none", "p48": "none", "p49": "none", "p50": "none", "p51": "none", "p52": "none", "p53": "none", "p54": "свою", "p55": "П’юр", "p56": "none", "p57": "none", "p58": "none", "p59": "none" } }, "arrangementEvents": [ { "phraseId": "p31", "kind": "stop", "reason": "Band stops on Стій for half a beat; the advice resumes over the pulse" }, { "phraseId": "p41", "kind": "thin", "reason": "Rhythm thins under the held time word; audible breath before не повірила" }, { "phraseId": "p55", "kind": "air-before", "reason": "One bar of guitar only after the self-worth cadence before the brand Round 3: explicit [Instrumental] section tag in the lyrics before the coda. Round 4: sung coda direction; no [Instrumental] tag (it produced a 9.6 s break)." } ], "characterVoices": [ { "character": "larysa", "phraseIds": [ "p29", "p31", "p35" ], "colour": "dry, slightly lower chest voice; amused; a heard laugh on засміялась" }, { "character": "daughter", "phraseIds": [ "p39", "p40" ], "colour": "lighter, airier, younger placement; conversational micro-pauses" }, { "character": "wife", "phraseIds": [ "p50" ], "colour": "flat, level, near-spoken; the compliment as an overheard quote, До речі as a dropped tag" } ], "mixTargets": { "vocalMinusMusicDbMin": -1, "vocalCentroidHzMin": 3600, "lraLuMax": 5, "note": "Vocal upfront and dry in every block except the coda (>= -3 dB); tight radio dynamics." }, "gateTable": { "tool": "tools/song_gates.py", "report": "https://gopure-targ-delta-c06fb16085.pages.dev/#gates", "p0Rows": [ "registerSpread", "lowRegisterShare", "sustained05", "heldNonFocus", "vocMinusMusicWorst", "centroid", "careSeconds", "careRate", "airBeforeBrand", "duration" ] } }, "style": "Every line is SUNG on a melody — the dialogue, the product list and the final brand and order block included; no spoken word, narration or voiceover anywhere. Asides sung lower but on pitch; the top saved for the question, Stiy, shist and the final pronoun. Clipped unstressed endings, no melisma on word endings, fast lines stay on pitch. Close-mic voice above the band, natural dynamics. Band stops on Stiy; breath on shist; one bar of guitar before the sung brand. Acoustic folk-pop matching the seed, 103 BPM, no intro. Larysa lower and drier, daughter lighter.", "negativeTags": "spoken word, narration, voiceover, talking, recitation, rap, melisma, vibrato tails, legato crooning, breathy whisper, reverb wash, instrumental intro, instrumental answers after every line, choir", "parameters": { "audioWeight": 0.88, "styleWeight": 0.55, "weirdnessConstraint": 0.1, "rationale": "Best-behaved parameter set across rounds 2 and 4 (continuous singing, clean ASR)." }, "alternativeParameters": { "audioWeight": 0.9, "styleWeight": 0.5, "weirdnessConstraint": 0.05, "rationale": "Closer to the seed with the least weirdness, to favour melodic continuity into the coda." }, "compositionReview": { "status": "accepted-by-agent", "reviewer": "Design panel + refuters (text) with Gemini 3.8 Flash complete-source auditory review", "method": "All phrases, cells and causal links assessed against the complete source in four sequential audio parts; performance decisions (register/hold/events/characters) reviewed prospectively. Accepts preparation only.", "evidence": [ { "path": "/workspaces/UGS/AdFactorySongFormat/trees/c06fb16085/runs/targ-ten-c06fb16085-v01/reviews/composition-v01/adjudication-v01.json", "sha256": "510d7f9b95afee0be88568ceb2bdf914f3ce8d5b86edeb636ce8d75eea9c9f31" }, { "path": "/workspaces/UGS/AdFactorySongFormat/trees/c06fb16085/runs/targ-ten-c06fb16085-v01/reviews/composition-v01/evidence-v01.json", "sha256": "c07a9c161a6468fc5dd80eeea033d0179fa059acea5faa3256ab839ea18080a5" } ], "limitations": [ "Text and source audit cannot establish any new sung stress or musical quality; first new audition remains unaccepted.", "Source evidence supplied as four transport pieces, not continuous human listening." ], "unresolved": [], "auditoryRuns": [ { "path": "/workspaces/UGS/AdFactorySongFormat/trees/c06fb16085/runs/targ-ten-c06fb16085-v01/reviews/composition-v01/evidence-v01.json", "sha256": "c07a9c161a6468fc5dd80eeea033d0179fa059acea5faa3256ab839ea18080a5" } ], "assessedPhraseIds": [ "p01", "p02", "p03", "p04", "p05", "p06", "p07", "p08", "p09", "p10", "p11", "p12", "p13", "p14", "p15", "p16", "p17", "p18", "p19", "p20", "p21", "p22", "p23", "p24", "p25", "p26", "p27", "p28", "p29", "p30", "p31", "p32", "p33", "p34", "p35", "p36", "p37", "p38", "p39", "p40", "p41", "p42", "p43", "p44", "p45", "p46", "p47", "p48", "p49", "p50", "p51", "p52", "p53", "p54", "p55", "p56", "p57", "p58", "p59" ], "assessedCausalLinkIds": [ "care-cost", "glance-wound", "advice-reset", "jar-transfer", "application-result", "return-selfworth" ], "assessedCellIds": [ "cost-cell", "gaze-cell", "opinion-cell", "recognition-return" ] }, "revisionNote": "v04: same 59 phrases and words; coda phrases mid register; directions demand full-voice singing for dialogue, list and coda; parameters r5a 0.88/0.55/0.10, r5b 0.90/0.50/0.05." }