{
 "phrases": [
  {
   "meaningIds": "t01",
   "text": "Зустріла в крамниці дружину колишнього.",
   "focus": "Зустріла",
   "gesture": "collision",
   "reason": "Instant sung entry on the encounter verb with no intro; identity finished before the next fact; final -ого clipped. Verbatim from accepted v02.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t02",
   "text": "Їй — тридцять чотири.",
   "focus": "тридцять чотири",
   "gesture": "fact",
   "reason": "Dry separate age hit, чоти́ри stressed on -ти-, last syllable short. Verbatim v02.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t03",
   "text": "Так глянула, наче їй мене жаль.",
   "focus": "жаль",
   "gesture": "reveal",
   "reason": "Grafted from B (all three judges' best line): Так absorbs the pickup so глянула is not stretched, the phrase closes on the stressed monosyllable жаль, and the шкода́/шко́да homograph trap is gone; мене́ is post-verbal, no preposition shift.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t04",
   "text": "Був березень.",
   "focus": "березень",
   "gesture": "time",
   "reason": "Low half-spoken temporal aside like Targ's 'That was in March'; бе́резень clipped, no held -зень (it was held 1.24 s in v1).",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t05",
   "text": "Ми з Андрієм — шістнадцять років у шлюбі.",
   "focus": "шістнадцять",
   "gesture": "duration",
   "reason": "Complete marriage fact unchanged from v02; brief release on шлюбі lets the departure contradict it.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t06",
   "text": "Він пішов до колеги.",
   "focus": "колеги",
   "gesture": "fact",
   "reason": "Concrete departure landed without embellishment. Verbatim v02.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t06,t07",
   "text": "Банально, я знаю.",
   "focus": "я знаю",
   "gesture": "aside",
   "reason": "Conspiratorial chest-voice aside to the listener, Targ's 'Cliché, I know' (his lowest phrase). Verbatim v02.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t07",
   "text": "Вона гарна без зусиль — ще час не торкнувся.",
   "focus": "час",
   "gesture": "observation",
   "reason": "Targ sings 'Because time hadn't shown up yet' in his lowest register, so it goes low and conversational; accepted wording kept (B's apocopated торкнувсь rejected as bookish).",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t08",
   "text": "А я за пів року немов постаріла на п'ять літ.",
   "focus": "п'ять літ",
   "gesture": "contrast",
   "reason": "B's word order (judges found A's 'постаріла немов на' clumsy): verb moved inside, phrase punches out on the stressed closed літ; немов keeps it a felt impression, not an age claim; постаріла (held 1.36 s) can no longer end the phrase.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t09",
   "text": "Стрес лишає слід.",
   "focus": "слід",
   "gesture": "cell-one",
   "reason": "First falling causal cell with a firm consonant end. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t09",
   "text": "Нічні сльози лишають слід.",
   "focus": "слід",
   "gesture": "cell-two",
   "reason": "Same cadence, wider cause, final beat slightly delayed. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t09",
   "text": "Коли дітям ти опора — це теж лишає слід.",
   "focus": "опора",
   "gesture": "cell-three",
   "reason": "Third return escalates to caregiving cost; «це» kept as subject (B's subjectless version rejected); the closing слід is the one place this cell may ring.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "слід",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t10",
   "text": "У суботу: крамниця, лосини, пучок. Без косметики.",
   "focus": "Без косметики",
   "gesture": "scene",
   "reason": "Everyday list as clipped low patter, each stressed syllable on the beat; accepted wording kept inside one sentence frame.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t11",
   "text": "Знов дивлюсь на крем. Стільки проб — і все марно.",
   "focus": "марно",
   "gesture": "failed-search",
   "reason": "Dampened low answer like Targ's 'I had already tried every single one'; motivates the later advice. Verbatim.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t12",
   "text": "Із сусіднього ряду її голос впізнала.",
   "focus": "голос",
   "gesture": "recognition",
   "reason": "Accepted v02 order: voice recognised from the next aisle before sight; no melisma on впізнала, clipped -ла.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t13",
   "text": "Вона вийшла. Погляд ковзнув по шиї.",
   "focus": "по шиї",
   "gesture": "scan",
   "reason": "Gaze narrows to the product zone; two short sentences, both clipped. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t13",
   "text": "Секунди дві — і усмішка.",
   "focus": "дві",
   "gesture": "scan-result",
   "reason": "A's colloquial approximative order (judges' best): any lean falls on stressed дві, not on the -ди of секунди (held 1.12 s); delivered low and dry like 'two seconds scan'.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t14",
   "text": "Не злість. Ні, ще гірше. Жалість.",
   "focus": "Жалість",
   "gesture": "gaze-first",
   "reason": "Three sung turns: cancel, delay, expose; only the reveal word may lengthen, on its stressed Жа-. Verbatim cell.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "Жалість",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t15",
   "text": "Наче я — колишня версія жінки, яку він першою любив.",
   "focus": "першою",
   "gesture": "identity-wound",
   "reason": "The one long thought of the block; clause closes on oxytone любив so the wound ends on a consonant instead of held -шою (1.22 s). Shared by all three designs.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t16",
   "text": "Дійшла до машини й сиділа п'ятнадцять хвилин.",
   "focus": "п'ятнадцять хвилин",
   "gesture": "consequence",
   "reason": "B's version (judge 2 best): action first, verb inside, number lands on closed хвилин; removes both the 1.96 s stretched До and the phrase-final сиділа that A re-seated.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t17",
   "text": "Не на неї злилась — на те, що в дзеркалі бачила.",
   "focus": "Не на неї",
   "gesture": "anger-turn",
   "reason": "Opinion-cell opening kept verbatim: rival negated, anger turned to what she saw (exact t17 sense); avoids B's на се́бе preposition-shift trap.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t18",
   "text": "На шиї — смуги, заломи й сухість.",
   "focus": "На шиї",
   "gesture": "problem",
   "reason": "Euphonic й; all three neck features named; ends on the closed сухість.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t19",
   "text": "Ніби світло в мені згасло.",
   "focus": "згасло",
   "gesture": "inner-image",
   "reason": "C's eight-syllable line (all three judges' best): the one earned hold of the section sits on stressed зга- with a short -сло release, like Targ's held 'inside'; в мені́ keeps its stress.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "згасло",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t20",
   "text": "Того тижня чекала доньку після танців.",
   "focus": "доньку",
   "gesture": "new-scene",
   "reason": "C's wording retires the owner's 'зааабирала' word entirely; low spoken lead-in like Targ's dance pickup; closes on танців.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t20",
   "text": "Ларису я бачила там щодня.",
   "focus": "Ларису",
   "gesture": "familiar-person",
   "reason": "C's line: name heard whole up front, phrase ends on stressed щодня́ (Ларису was held 1.1 s mid-phrase in v1); low, no lead-in stretch on Ла-.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t21",
   "text": "Їй п'ятдесят п'ять. А шия — гладенька.",
   "focus": "А шия",
   "gesture": "credible-contrast",
   "reason": "Mature age separated from the visibly smooth neck with a small surprised lift. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t21",
   "text": "Питаю: «Чим ти користуєшся?»",
   "focus": "Чим",
   "gesture": "question",
   "reason": "Reserved top: rising melodic play on Чим ти like Targ's 'What do you use?', the hold on the lexically stressed -ту́- of користу́єшся (the reading frozen in the accepted ledger stress-ledger-v03; the dictionary lists both кори́стуєшся and користу́єшся), -єшся clipped.",
   "register": "high",
   "holdAllowed": "користуєшся",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t22",
   "text": "Вона засміялась, глянула на шию:",
   "focus": "засміялась",
   "gesture": "laugh-and-inspect",
   "reason": "Subject kept so the speaker switch from Питаю is audible; Larysa's laugh enacted on засміялась; глянула mid-phrase, not at the cadence.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t22",
   "text": "«А ти що наносиш?»",
   "focus": "А ти",
   "gesture": "counter-question",
   "reason": "Larysa lower and drier, half-amused, smile still in the voice; addressee flips after the inspection.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "larysa"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t23",
   "text": "«Кислоти, сироватки, креми — міняю все підряд».",
   "focus": "все підряд",
   "gesture": "confession",
   "reason": "B's patter (judges 2 and 3 best): catalogue releases on closed підряд, which Larysa throws back in the next line; no open -ю ending.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t24",
   "text": "«Стій. Не все підряд. Доглядай щодня».",
   "focus": "Стій",
   "gesture": "advice-pivot",
   "reason": "Band stops dead on Стій for half a beat (arrangement event 1); advice echoes підряд and restarts the pulse in Larysa's dry colour.",
   "register": "high",
   "holdAllowed": "Стій",
   "character": "larysa"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t25",
   "text": "Назавтра Лариса дала мені банку.",
   "focus": "Лариса дала",
   "gesture": "handoff",
   "reason": "Наза́втра replaces the 1.88 s stretched Наступного with no hold on the lead-in (C's Назавтра hold rejected); donor, transfer and jar in one causal action.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t25",
   "text": "Про цей крем ще не чула.",
   "focus": "не чула",
   "gesture": "unfamiliar-object",
   "reason": "Accepted v02 clause restored (fixes A's gender-slip «про такий»); the purple colour moves to the packshot on screen to buy the sung four-ingredient list within the care budget.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t26",
   "text": "У банці — купуасу, гіалурон, оливні ліпіди й кофеїн.",
   "focus": "купуасу",
   "gesture": "ingredient-list",
   "reason": "Jar named as antecedent; four seller ingredients as clipped patter inside one sentence; ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; sentence-initial У for euphony.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t26",
   "text": "«На чисту шию — тонко, вгору. Щовечора. Не міняй».",
   "focus": "Щовечора",
   "gesture": "ritual",
   "reason": "Larysa's instruction with all ritual facts (clean neck, thin layer, upward, nightly) and the routine reset «Не міняй» as a real imperative; cut from 19 to 16 syllables, нічо́го trap removed.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "larysa"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t27",
   "text": "Без печіння. Без лущення. Комфортно.",
   "focus": "Комфортно",
   "gesture": "felt-result",
   "reason": "Two negations release into the personal comfort word; accepted verbatim (C's bare «Комфорт.» rejected); -но clipped.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t28",
   "text": "За три тижні біля дзеркала спинилась.",
   "focus": "спинилась",
   "gesture": "partial-surprise",
   "reason": "Ends on the consonant-closed verb so the mirror stop is a stop, not a held дзеркала (0.92 s).",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t28",
   "text": "Смуги вже менш помітні.",
   "focus": "менш помітні",
   "gesture": "partial-result",
   "reason": "Clearly partial improvement, quiet mid delivery. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t29",
   "text": "Донька каже: «Мамо, ти інакша.",
   "focus": "Мамо",
   "gesture": "child-observation",
   "reason": "Owner-praised line kept verbatim; the daughter is lighter and higher in colour from Мамо onward, not in the reserved top.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "daughter"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t29",
   "text": "Гарно інакша. Світліша якась».",
   "focus": "Гарно",
   "gesture": "child-clarification",
   "reason": "C's fix (all three judges' best): keeps the praised word світліша and the childlike character, but the cadence moves to stressed closed яка́сь, so the 1.32 s held -ша cannot recur.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "daughter"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t30",
   "text": "А за шість — не повірила очам!",
   "focus": "шість",
   "gesture": "time-hold",
   "reason": "Time word шість held with a breath before the reveal; rhythm thins under it; не повірила очам clipped after.",
   "register": "high",
   "holdAllowed": "шість",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t30",
   "text": "Шия гладенька. Ні смуг, ні заломів.",
   "focus": "Ні смуг",
   "gesture": "complete-result",
   "reason": "Complete neck outcome with two audible negations, consonant close. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t31",
   "text": "Десять років шкіра такою рівною не була.",
   "focus": "Десять років",
   "gesture": "comparison",
   "reason": "Personal decade comparison ending on oxytone була́ (a stressed final, so any length is legitimate). Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t31",
   "text": "З відкритою шиєю я вийшла на люди.",
   "focus": "відкритою шиєю",
   "gesture": "neck-payoff",
   "reason": "Idiom «вийти на люди» (appear in public) completes the sentence that A left hanging and avoids C's pompous «у світ» and B's «— і все»; шиєю is mid-phrase, ending лю́ди has one clipped unstressed syllable.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t32",
   "text": "У червні доньчин клас давав концерт.",
   "focus": "червні",
   "gesture": "return-time",
   "reason": "B's sentence: month inside a prepositional phrase (Червень was a 1.96 s one-word opener), closes on концерт.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t32",
   "text": "Донька грала на піаніно.",
   "focus": "Донька",
   "gesture": "recital",
   "reason": "Child's event as its own complete thought, brighter and closer; -но clipped. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t33",
   "text": "Дружина Андрія сіла неподалік.",
   "focus": "Дружина Андрія",
   "gesture": "return-encounter",
   "reason": "Same evaluator returns; ends on oxytone неподалік. Verbatim.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t33",
   "text": "І знов той погляд. Не жалість. Не співчуття. Розгублена.",
   "focus": "Розгублена",
   "gesture": "gaze-return",
   "reason": "C's recall (judges 1 and 2 best): 'that look again' with no stretchable Глянула opener; the cell sung as dry staccato; Розгублена may lean only on -гу́б-, -лена clipped.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t34",
   "text": "Після концерту підійшла.",
   "focus": "підійшла",
   "gesture": "approach",
   "reason": "Unsolicited approach in the narrator's voice, ends on oxytone підійшла́; Після sung through (held 1.16 s in v1), no lead-in stretch.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t34",
   "text": "«Ти дуже гарно виглядаєш… до речі».",
   "focus": "дуже гарно",
   "gesture": "compliment-with-tag",
   "reason": "Wife polite and even in her own colour; до речі arrives after a beat as a low spoken afterthought, Targ's delayed 'by the way'.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "wife"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t35",
   "text": "Та сама, через яку в машині сиділа я навесні.",
   "focus": "Та сама",
   "gesture": "memory-return",
   "reason": "Causal через яку (the woman because of whom); low register memory return ending on oxytone навесні.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t36",
   "text": "Я щиро сказала: «Дякую». І справді так відчувала.",
   "focus": "щиро",
   "gesture": "sincere-response",
   "reason": "Accepted sincere line kept verbatim (judges rejected B's «не був жест»); Дя́кую short, -ла of відчувала clipped by direction.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t37",
   "text": "Не тому, що її думка щось важить.",
   "focus": "її",
   "gesture": "external-negation",
   "reason": "Colloquial «щось важить» replaces the held важлива (1.4 s) and keeps the weight on whose opinion; C's «важить» without щось rejected.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t37",
   "text": "А тому, що свою я нарешті ціную.",
   "focus": "свою",
   "gesture": "self-worth",
   "reason": "Praised line kept; the peak and the only hold move to the pronoun свою, ціную descends to a complete cadence before the guitar bar.",
   "register": "high",
   "holdAllowed": "свою",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t38",
   "text": "Крем називається… Ґоу П’юр.",
   "focus": "Ґоу П’юр",
   "gesture": "brand",
   "reason": "Targ's t38 shape: brand ends its phrase after a breath following називається; hard Ґ attack, name held whole.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "П’юр",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t39",
   "text": "Ім'я й номер залиш у формі.",
   "focus": "Ім'я й номер",
   "gesture": "order",
   "reason": "Order form condition in one calm clause; внизу said once in the last line.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t39",
   "text": "На пошті оглянь — і платиш потім.",
   "focus": "потім",
   "gesture": "payment-condition",
   "reason": "Inspection before payment with the unambiguous пла́тиш, avoiding the оплати́/опла́ти heteronym; ends on a clipped word.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t39",
   "text": "На повернення — шістдесят днів.",
   "focus": "шістдесят днів",
   "gesture": "return-condition",
   "reason": "B's order: the sixty-day window lands on the stressed closed днів with the number on the beat, instead of open -ння.",
   "register": "mid",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  },
  {
   "meaningIds": "t39",
   "text": "Якщо тобі потрібно — посилання внизу.",
   "focus": "Якщо тобі потрібно",
   "gesture": "optional-coda",
   "reason": "Accepted personal low-pressure invitation, half-spoken with a fade like Targ's 'If you need it'; внизу́ short, no hold.",
   "register": "low",
   "holdAllowed": "none",
   "character": "narrator"
  }
 ],
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  {
   "id": "s1-hook",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 0,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 8,
   "direction": "Sung at once, no intro; short dry facts; asides half-spoken in chest voice; clipped word endings",
   "intendedSeconds": 25
  },
  {
   "id": "s2-cost-store",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 9,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 16,
   "direction": "Same falling cadence three times, third slid may ring; store list as quick patter; the smile line low and dry",
   "intendedSeconds": 25
  },
  {
   "id": "s3-wound",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 17,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 22,
   "direction": "Negation, then delayed reveal on zhalist; long thought flows to lyubyv; hold only zhaslo, clip everything else",
   "intendedSeconds": 24
  },
  {
   "id": "s4-mentor",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 23,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 30,
   "direction": "Low spoken lead-in; the question rises and plays on chym ty korystuyeshsya; Larysa lower and drier; band stops dead on Stiy, resumes on the advice",
   "intendedSeconds": 26
  },
  {
   "id": "s5-care",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 31,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 35,
   "direction": "Unhurried care, Larysa dry and warm; ingredient names as clipped patter, ku-pu-a-SU four full syllables; short endings, no held vowels",
   "intendedSeconds": 18
  },
  {
   "id": "s6-change",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 36,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 43,
   "direction": "Mirror stop; daughter lighter and higher; rhythm thins and a breath on shist, then the result plain",
   "intendedSeconds": 25
  },
  {
   "id": "s7-return",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 44,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 50,
   "direction": "Second gaze as dry staccato; the wife polite and even; do rechi dropped low after a beat",
   "intendedSeconds": 26
  },
  {
   "id": "s8-selfworth",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 51,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 53,
   "direction": "Sincere thanks; peak and hold on svoyu, descend on tsinuyu; complete cadence",
   "intendedSeconds": 13
  },
  {
   "id": "s9-coda",
   "firstPhraseIndex": 54,
   "lastPhraseIndex": 58,
   "direction": "One bar of guitar alone, then the brand ends its phrase: breath after nazyvayetsya, name attacked whole; conditions calm and clear; last line half-spoken, fade",
   "intendedSeconds": 19
  }
 ],
 "style": "Speech-shaped acoustic folk-pop matching the seed, 103 BPM, no intro. Dry close-mic conversational female lead upfront, crisp consonants, clipped unstressed endings, no melisma on word endings; asides in low chest voice near speech, top saved for four marked words; lists as quick patter. Band stops dead on Стій; rhythm thins with an audible breath on шість; one bar of guitar alone before the brand; otherwise continuous singing. Larysa lower and drier, daughter lighter. Tight radio dynamics, voice above the band.",
 "negativeTags": "melisma, vibrato tails, legato crooning, breathy whisper vocal, reverb wash, instrumental intro, instrumental answers after every line, choir, backing vocal stacks, autotune, synth pads, EDM, rap, opera, slow ballad",
 "parameters": {
  "audioWeight": 0.88,
  "styleWeight": 0.55,
  "weirdnessConstraint": 0.1,
  "rationale": "Conservative purchase: identical to the accepted v02 purchase (director-purchase-v02.json: 0.88/0.55/0.10, V6, English Targ seed) so the take isolates the effect of the text and the section directions. audioWeight 0.88 keeps the 103.4 BPM grid, the instant hook without intro and the folk-pop feel that are on the keep list; styleWeight 0.55 is the level at which pronunciation and the seed's register spread were stable in the accepted take; weirdness 0.10 forbids new melodic material. The three arrangement events, the register plan and the character colours are then carried mainly by the bracketed section directions in the lyrics; if this take misses the tacet on Стій or the guitar bar, the plan says obtain them by editing the same take, not by regenerating."
 },
 "alternativeParameters": {
  "audioWeight": 0.86,
  "styleWeight": 0.68,
  "weirdnessConstraint": 0.1,
  "rationale": "Bolder purchase: styleWeight 0.55 -> 0.68 so the rewritten style text (dry close-mic upfront voice, clipped endings, low chest asides, top for four words, band stop on Стій, thinning on шість, guitar bar before the brand) actually pushes the delivery and mix that v1 at 0.55 ignored (voice sank up to 4.4 dB under the band, no tacet, 20 long notes); this addresses the P0 register, syllable-economy, mix and stops gaps in one move. audioWeight drops only to 0.86 because the seed still has to supply tempo, key and the first-hook shape, but a notch of freedom is needed for the arrangement to stop and thin where the text asks. Weirdness stays 0.10: earlier runs above about 0.65 styleWeight risked the seed's melody drifting, so the bolder set spends its risk budget on style adherence, not on ornament or pronunciation instability. Both takes are then filtered by the same gate table (register.json spread >= 10 st, <= 10 notes >= 0.5 s, care <= 20 s / 3.6 syl/s, coda <= 3.2 syl/s, three events) and the final choice is by listening."
 },
 "syllableEstimate": {
  "total": 665,
  "care": 66,
  "coda": 50
 },
 "provenance": {
  "panel": "design-ten-song-text-wf_033bbe34-24e",
  "synth": "design-synth-v01.json",
  "verdicts": "design-verdicts-v01.json",
  "directorEdits": [
   "p15 accepted v02 order",
   "p22 euphonic й",
   "p28 subject restored",
   "p34 У банці antecedent, moved before the ritual line",
   "p36 Крем на пальці dropped (fragment, care budget)",
   "p42 gesture time-hold",
   "p52 через яку",
   "p56 brand with written break",
   "p57 залиш у формі",
   "p58 платиш потім (heteronym avoided)",
   "negative tags no longer forbid the guitar bar",
   "bracket cues transliterated"
  ]
 }
}